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Last edited by McAlec (12-05-30 20:56)
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Last edited by genericboringposter (12-06-03 16:18)
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Thanks, McAlec. I've revised the last several lines to reflect your ideas.
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So close, yet so far.
I can do nothing to improve what you have already, Generic, but I'd say maybe unblur the lines between the principles and intentions and what kind of future MetaCorp is. I get how the questions are very much the same, but maybe a clearer separation of the answers would get us up the last half step.
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I'm thinking that the problem may be that I'm being too wordy and not coherent enough early. I'm going to try another response below.
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